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Spring not only loves to play the violin, he also loves to sing <3

and he has a wonderful voice, like the dawn of the season itself


multiple coloured micron pens and copic markers on layout paper
Spring belongs to me <3

Critiques


:iconultimate-chaos12:
First and foremost, your inking is absolutely fabulous. Wonderful blending, and your linework is superb.

What I really love about this, is the explosion of colours in your central figure. Your palette choice is really strong, and when I look at it, I really get the feeling that I'm looking at spring. I just wish you had've continued the same vibrance into the background.

Your background, is a little busy, but I think it actually works with your psychedelic theme. I feel as if the grey is mulling it down though, as if you were afraid to use too much colour. However given the craziness of your figure, I think you should have brought a lot more saturation to create a bit more consistency.

All in all though, this is a lovely piece. Your composition is full, your figure is nicely placed on a third. Again, can't stress enough, your blending is absolutely amazing.

Lovely job, I hope to see more of these from you.
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I know spring is supposed to be a colorful character, but the combination of a superbright colored character with such a busy backgroung creates disharmony and leaves the viewer a little overwhelmed. I think the effect could be better acheived with a much simpler background. As it is now, the attention is taken away from the character by the business of the piece.

That's really all I had to say, but there's a 100 word minimum, so I have to add something else. Hmmmm... I have nothing else. Like I said, this character is great, but he bacground is much too busy.
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:iconrenreg-123:
it's so pretty and colourful *awe*
:iconaryan-dark:
Beautiful. I am constantly in awe of your work.

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Holy skitzophrenia, Batman!
:iconranaelaseim:
Love his outfit, and the songbirds are awesome. ^_^ Very lovely. It does epitomize spring!

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Good Morning Beautiful, how was your night?
Mine was wonderful with you by my side
When I open my eyes and see your sweet face
It's a Good Morning Beautiful Day
I am Kuzon, a member of *Avatards-Anonymous
:iconabilden:
Amazing <3 The colours are just gorgeous.
:iconrayvinn:
Trippy, and lovely.

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When Pack meets with Pack in the Jungle, and neither will go from the trail,
Lie down till the leaders have spoken--it may be fair words shall prevail.
- The Law of the Jungle
:iconfi3ndish:
amazing
;o;

why are you so good with copics???
<3


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:iconpoison-peach:
This is absolutely lovely! I love the colors in his hair (If I can call it that. X3).

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"Oh, I'm sorry Billy but you need 15 tickets to live."

“I got it out of the bread” - My Mom. :heart: owo

~Liars Lie, so we make them eat Poisoned Pie.~
:iconservina:
wow. this soo cool :)

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~ :heart: one of my many weaknessess will always and foremostly be Vampires :heart: ~
:iconpufflekiss:
Psychodelic! But when can we see Summer?
S/he needs some lovin too D;

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Recordous!

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