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Autumn by =OwlGem:iconOwlGem:

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When Gem becomes autumn :3

it freaks her out a bit sometimes

her eyes turn into owl eyes and she has control over wind and plants and temperature. BLAH

it's taken me a while to decide what she would look like as autumn. i still might tweak some stuff here and there >u>

Gem belongs to me

copic markers and ink :>


Edit: as for the fiery thing, i was only using a few copics at the time. i didnt have many browns on me. she could stand to be a little browner but...lets just say shes having some sort of power surge myes?;D

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=luniara May 2, 2009, 7:36:31 PM
I've been waiting to see how you pulled this off this DESIGN for awhile.

I think you pulled it off well. The colors POP! Though at times I find things get a little busy in the outfit. I think not using black outlines on the designs would've helped not draw so much attention there. Like someone else said, I think the boots don't seem to match. (I think the designs on them contributes to "busy".)

Try watching your lighting/shading. It's wonderful, but I think with her powers going off, the lighting would be minimal if it was coming from the direction you have it in. (two sources of light). Being that this is simply a DESIGN, there isn't much to give input on except throw you little ideas.

Overall, I think you are in the right direction, Gems! I dig it.
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~Maltina Apr 30, 2009, 11:05:02 AM
I like the colors of this piece you did, but maybe a little more brown could be used to bring out more Autumn. I find the sleek outfit you used very interesting. Usually you see very earthy styled for Autumn themed pictures, and I like how you went with something different. It makes me think she's like a magical fighter rather than a personified concept. But if that's what you're going for then that's okay too. However, the boots are throwing me off a bit. Perhaps she could go bearfoot? Overall I like the concept and I think you did a great job.
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*FlamiatheDemon Apr 30, 2009, 5:51:53 AM
MAGNIFICENT. Me luvz it :3

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=Kirari-kitsune Apr 30, 2009, 5:52:01 AM
Lovely choice of colours.<3 I love her pose, too!

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=AnimeWolf89 Apr 30, 2009, 5:52:02 AM
shes absolutely lovely :heart:

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~Deviantownagezlol Apr 30, 2009, 5:52:13 AM
wow. great job, the colors are sick =D
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~themaskedcrusader Apr 30, 2009, 5:53:53 AM
Awesome! As always!

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~Hinari13 Apr 30, 2009, 5:55:16 AM
I like the shading on the clothing and I really like her sleeves for some reason :3

I love how her hair came out I can't draw hair to save my life ^^;

<333

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~Betrayed-Innocence Apr 30, 2009, 5:55:43 AM
I love the pose. The color job is just amazing~!
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~shaizic Apr 30, 2009, 6:01:13 AM
Luvly colors!

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~UlquiorraJaggerjack Apr 30, 2009, 6:09:03 AM
Wow! How cool! You really did this well!!

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~werewolfs-curse Apr 30, 2009, 6:10:24 AM
This is beautiful, I love the coloring in this. Great job ^_^

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